When a song must be sung: short poem
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Dale and burrealist.
@dale - the hoof drops are to rhyme with rooftops. Thanks for your comments on the rest of the poem. Food for thought there.
@burrealist - I think both "will" and "shall" are grammatically acceptable there, the latter implyimg conscious deliberation perhaps. Thanks for your other comments.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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When a song must be sung: short poem - by Achebe - 02-17-2016, 03:04 PM
RE: When a song must be sung: short poem - by Achebe - 04-01-2017, 11:44 AM



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