02-08-2017, 02:17 AM
Hi, i think this is pretty great. What I did notice, and it started to distract from your message a little, was that you repeated a few words a few too many times ... specifically "color" and "page". I think someone above mentioned that... maybe finding some alternate words that convey they same meaning - or convey it even better - might really help this. But overall, i love the imagery and the idea that the artist is leaving a bit of themselves in their art. Way cool. Thanks for sharing.