02-07-2017, 01:16 PM
I like the story this poems tells...it's easy on the ears...I can almost see someone sitting on a stool in front of an easel around which paint has sprinkled the floor more than the canvas.
The colors, having each their separate "message" (personification usage) is intriguing, but when the lines begin it seems to distract from the overall tone I mentioned above. Perhaps a more intimate point of view...as the colors drip, pour, etc. what does the eye see and the heart feel from the artists' perspective?
The poem reminds me a bit of the "Tale of Three Trees", I suppose...
Great material to work with!
I like the story this poems tells...it's easy on the ears...I can almost see someone sitting on a stool in front of an easel around which paint has sprinkled the floor more than the canvas.
The colors, having each their separate "message" (personification usage) is intriguing, but when the lines begin it seems to distract from the overall tone I mentioned above. Perhaps a more intimate point of view...as the colors drip, pour, etc. what does the eye see and the heart feel from the artists' perspective?
The poem reminds me a bit of the "Tale of Three Trees", I suppose...
Great material to work with!
The colors, having each their separate "message" (personification usage) is intriguing, but when the lines begin it seems to distract from the overall tone I mentioned above. Perhaps a more intimate point of view...as the colors drip, pour, etc. what does the eye see and the heart feel from the artists' perspective?
The poem reminds me a bit of the "Tale of Three Trees", I suppose...
Great material to work with!
I like the story this poems tells...it's easy on the ears...I can almost see someone sitting on a stool in front of an easel around which paint has sprinkled the floor more than the canvas.
The colors, having each their separate "message" (personification usage) is intriguing, but when the lines begin it seems to distract from the overall tone I mentioned above. Perhaps a more intimate point of view...as the colors drip, pour, etc. what does the eye see and the heart feel from the artists' perspective?
The poem reminds me a bit of the "Tale of Three Trees", I suppose...
Great material to work with!