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01-29-2017, 06:52 AM

(01-29-2017, 05:24 AM)Leanne Wrote: Thanks Donald. The end lines are gone instantly, I agree.

To clarify: what you're asking for is a freeverse poem, because rhyme is not serious enough?

No I'm not saying chuck the rhymes, sorry if I seemed sniffy about them. I'm just not sure about their placement, structurally.

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Saturday - by Leanne - 01-28-2017, 05:07 AM

RE: Saturday - by Donald Q. - 01-28-2017, 11:39 PM

RE: Saturday - by Leanne - 01-29-2017, 05:24 AM

RE: Saturday - by Donald Q. - 01-29-2017, 06:52 AM

RE: Saturday - by Leanne - 01-29-2017, 07:58 AM

RE: Saturday - by Donald Q. - 01-29-2017, 08:32 AM

RE: Saturday - by Leanne - 01-29-2017, 09:16 AM

RE: Saturday - by Achebe - 01-29-2017, 11:36 AM

RE: Saturday - by Leanne - 01-29-2017, 11:54 AM

RE: Saturday - by Keith - 01-30-2017, 07:19 AM

RE: Saturday - by Leanne - 01-30-2017, 07:24 AM

RE: Saturday - by Donald Q. - 01-30-2017, 07:54 AM

RE: Saturday - by Leanne - 01-30-2017, 08:00 AM

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