The black book

[Brownlie]

Hey Mark, I think your showing some chops here cause I can follow some of it, but I still can think about it a little. 

A black book existed with a smooth leather frame
and a broad spine that held its lips together
allowing its mouth to open and close
its thick and many layered tongue inside
for all its pages were sketched and drawn upon
with scribbles, words, sentences, even pictures
but with no unifying clarity
like an orchestra without its conductor
were the writings of this intriguing book --were is a weak verb.
of God, history, art and literature
were the subject matters of this vast work
but its substance held many contradictions
for on the face of the great book was etched
the title: “God exists” and the words:
“by Carl Jung” written below in biro.

As the author’s mental state worsened
so to does the book’s contents throughout -- is the tense right in this line?
names of lovers were written down everywhere
fears of death and end times were shown vividly
the book was even ripped up in a fit of rage
like Frankenstein’s hateful creator
was the author in his storm of wrath -- was is a weak verb. In fact, to be verbs are sort of weak in general unless you need them.
yet the book was pieced back together
from the broken flesh that remained of it
refashioned and now renamed as: Manic
and with the author’s identity revealed
as Mark Cecil Brownlee of Armagh

Was a little confused, but I have headache. Would use some better verbs for some of those to bes.