11-07-2016, 10:21 PM
Thanks Tom,
Always enjoy your insightful critiques. I dislike giving the whole goat away, so I will only give half. The speaker and his lady love, as well as their relationship are symbolic observers over time of the fall of empires and trying to draw a conclusion as to why this happens. At times they are the observers and at times they are the players. It traverses history (these are the high spots) from Alexander through the Ottoman Empire, the Beatles, and the latest Brad and Angelina. Of course as you noted there are other types of empires, philosophical, musical and literary, et. al..
Thanks for the punctuation catches, will correct. Will consider one less aching guitar had
Would comment more, but I have to go to work.
dale
Always enjoy your insightful critiques. I dislike giving the whole goat away, so I will only give half. The speaker and his lady love, as well as their relationship are symbolic observers over time of the fall of empires and trying to draw a conclusion as to why this happens. At times they are the observers and at times they are the players. It traverses history (these are the high spots) from Alexander through the Ottoman Empire, the Beatles, and the latest Brad and Angelina. Of course as you noted there are other types of empires, philosophical, musical and literary, et. al..
Thanks for the punctuation catches, will correct. Will consider one less aching guitar had
Would comment more, but I have to go to work.dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.