09-10-2016, 06:57 AM
not really sure how to read this
(09-05-2016, 07:26 AM)Brownlie Wrote: Just before-really enjoy the writing style here, especially the first and last blocks about balloonman, the rest was just a little hard to follow, my eyes are darting all over the place.
Black Friday when paper buckle hats
and rotting pumpkins
line the curb
The wind-driven balloonMan writhes with glee the long spaces seem like commentary
and it’s as-if-he-took Abilify with do you need so many 'and's?
all-the-would-be poets
zonked on propylhexedrine and this is fun
akathisia’s the final diagnosis and it's-
fall
when everybody
hears the chalk-board scraping, metaphor-of-reaping nails of death
in chill-
toward
winter turbulence its fall its winter its spring its thanksgiving currently? just before black friday
(But all the seasons soon will die
so it’s spring.)
JoeWinstonandRaul are honking on the 605
They’re racing home to meet unceasing gift-filled drones
and it’s after Turkey Day the bar code scanners don’t need clerks bar scanners seems to come out of nowhere
and the organ-
less
spasmodic balloonMan
feels no lack or pain but smiling with a palpitating chest
beckons
them
to buy gives a surreal look almost like a horror story or the clown from pee wees big adventure.
used Fords
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches