09-02-2016, 05:18 AM
I was actually thinking of this one throughout the day, i think this block of words could be shorter, fewer lines, read like a mantra. But i also want two more blocks of similar rhythmic style of alternate view of the same pile of work, why the work must be done, or what it took to get to this pile of work. Also, i dont like using the same rhyme twice (expectations), but to each his own if you must
(08-27-2016, 03:02 AM)Alic Elliot Wrote: Sitting at home
Feeling alone
Homework piled high
I stare at it and sigh
Heightened expectations
Crippling limitations
I have to do well
Or end up in a living hell
And a job I hate
Doomed to my fate
I set my bar higher than I can reach
“You can do it"- Time to practice what I preach
No mistakes
Limited breaks
Have to work faster
Push myself harder
To meet expectations
There's no exceptions
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