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Expectations [Edit 1]

Expectations [Edit 1]
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Andy Kaufman
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08-27-2016, 04:41 AM
Everything between I have to do well and To meet expectations can be cut. You start off fair enough, but it doesn't get any better. If you could put something more original and interesting between the start and the finish you might have something.
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Expectations [Edit 1] - by Alic Elliot - 08-27-2016, 03:02 AM
RE: Expectations - by rowens - 08-27-2016, 04:41 AM
RE: Expectations - by stampede331 - 08-27-2016, 06:01 AM
RE: Expectations - by Achebe - 08-27-2016, 06:37 AM
RE: Expectations - by Lizzie - 08-27-2016, 07:03 PM
RE: Expectations - by CRNDLSM - 09-02-2016, 05:18 AM
RE: Expectations [Edit 1] - by Alic Elliot - 09-05-2016, 04:52 AM
RE: Expectations [Edit 1] - by rowens - 09-06-2016, 03:59 AM
RE: Expectations [Edit 1] - by Vox_Nihilis - 09-11-2016, 02:40 PM



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