08-09-2016, 02:03 AM
(08-06-2016, 09:19 PM)dukealien Wrote: Permanence/The Visiting Poet's Lament (Senryu)as a teacher I can appreciate the frustration in being attached to menial tasks and objects. writing would be a better use of time, as the title suggests.
These cups are full of
paperclips and safety pins
but I need staples!
i don't feel permanence in the verse though, if anything the opposite.
just a thought. thanks for sharing
Thanks to this Forum

