Permanence
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(08-06-2016, 09:19 PM)dukealien Wrote:  Permanence/The Visiting Poet's Lament (Senryu)

These cups are full of
paperclips and safety pins
but I need staples!
as a teacher I can appreciate the frustration in being attached to menial tasks and objects. writing would be a better use of time, as the title suggests.

i don't feel permanence in the verse though, if anything the opposite.

just a thought. thanks for sharing
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Messages In This Thread
Permanence - by dukealien - 08-06-2016, 09:19 PM
RE: Permanence - by billy - 08-08-2016, 05:48 PM
RE: Permanence - by kolemath - 08-09-2016, 02:03 AM
RE: Permanence - by dukealien - 08-14-2016, 05:31 AM
RE: Permanence - by Southern Scarab - 08-23-2016, 04:24 AM
RE: Permanence - by next - 08-23-2016, 08:16 PM
RE: Permanence - by Savanah - 08-23-2016, 11:39 PM
RE: Permanence - by D.MYST - 09-04-2016, 11:05 AM



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