Revision Process
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When I read recent books of poetry, not all of the time, but most of the time I think these poems seem extensively workshopped. While they're technically sufficient, they feel to me as though they lack character. And sure enough, when I get to the Acknowledgements the author is thanking and praising a list of their workshop friends. To many people that might sound nice. But the fact that I'm thinking that as I'm reading the poems seems a real criticism to me.

And, if I found out that van Gogh's paintings were done by a four year old retarded kid in 1991 it would affect how I experience the work.
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Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-07-2016, 11:13 AM
RE: Revision Process - by QDeathstar - 07-07-2016, 11:55 AM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-07-2016, 01:48 PM
RE: Revision Process - by ellajam - 07-07-2016, 12:19 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Todd - 07-07-2016, 12:55 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Leanne - 07-07-2016, 02:49 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-08-2016, 06:11 AM
RE: Revision Process - by shemthepenman - 07-08-2016, 10:37 AM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-08-2016, 12:05 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-09-2016, 10:00 AM
RE: Revision Process - by milo - 07-07-2016, 11:31 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-08-2016, 12:09 PM
RE: Revision Process - by milo - 07-08-2016, 02:43 PM
RE: Revision Process - by shemthepenman - 07-08-2016, 12:11 AM
RE: Revision Process - by rowens - 07-08-2016, 01:38 AM
RE: Revision Process - by QDeathstar - 07-08-2016, 04:38 AM
RE: Revision Process - by ellajam - 07-08-2016, 09:30 AM
RE: Revision Process - by rowens - 07-08-2016, 11:14 AM
RE: Revision Process - by ellajam - 07-08-2016, 11:22 AM
RE: Revision Process - by shemthepenman - 07-08-2016, 11:33 AM
RE: Revision Process - by rowens - 07-08-2016, 11:24 AM
RE: Revision Process - by rowens - 07-08-2016, 11:47 AM
RE: Revision Process - by shemthepenman - 07-08-2016, 01:31 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-09-2016, 08:46 AM
RE: Revision Process - by QDeathstar - 07-08-2016, 12:06 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Leanne - 07-08-2016, 05:14 PM
RE: Revision Process - by shemthepenman - 07-08-2016, 10:18 PM
RE: Revision Process - by rowens - 07-08-2016, 11:33 PM
RE: Revision Process - by shemthepenman - 07-09-2016, 12:56 AM
RE: Revision Process - by rowens - 07-09-2016, 01:08 AM
RE: Revision Process - by shemthepenman - 07-09-2016, 04:54 AM
RE: Revision Process - by rowens - 07-09-2016, 05:37 AM
RE: Revision Process - by Leanne - 07-09-2016, 08:11 AM
RE: Revision Process - by shemthepenman - 07-09-2016, 08:43 AM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-09-2016, 08:31 AM
RE: Revision Process - by shemthepenman - 07-09-2016, 08:47 AM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-09-2016, 11:27 AM
RE: Revision Process - by ellajam - 07-09-2016, 09:22 AM
RE: Revision Process - by Leanne - 07-09-2016, 08:44 AM
RE: Revision Process - by rowens - 07-09-2016, 09:05 AM
RE: Revision Process - by Leanne - 07-09-2016, 09:09 AM
RE: Revision Process - by rowens - 07-09-2016, 09:15 AM
RE: Revision Process - by rowens - 07-09-2016, 10:47 AM
RE: Revision Process - by rowens - 07-09-2016, 01:43 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-10-2016, 02:25 AM
RE: Revision Process - by ellajam - 07-10-2016, 02:36 AM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-10-2016, 09:27 AM
RE: Revision Process - by shemthepenman - 07-10-2016, 01:28 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-10-2016, 02:07 PM
RE: Revision Process - by shemthepenman - 07-11-2016, 09:37 AM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-11-2016, 09:49 AM
RE: Revision Process - by shemthepenman - 07-11-2016, 12:27 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-11-2016, 03:54 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Achebe - 07-10-2016, 07:22 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Todd - 07-10-2016, 08:58 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-11-2016, 02:02 AM
RE: Revision Process - by rowens - 07-10-2016, 04:14 AM
RE: Revision Process - by billy - 07-10-2016, 09:05 AM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-10-2016, 07:01 AM
RE: Revision Process - by rowens - 07-10-2016, 07:13 AM
RE: Revision Process - by shemthepenman - 07-10-2016, 07:53 AM
RE: Revision Process - by QDeathstar - 07-10-2016, 01:48 PM
RE: Revision Process - by QDeathstar - 07-10-2016, 02:13 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-10-2016, 02:19 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Leanne - 07-10-2016, 02:32 PM
RE: Revision Process - by QDeathstar - 07-10-2016, 02:56 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-10-2016, 03:27 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Wjames - 07-10-2016, 02:58 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-12-2016, 02:32 PM
RE: Revision Process - by RiverNotch - 07-10-2016, 04:25 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-10-2016, 05:33 PM
RE: Revision Process - by ellajam - 07-10-2016, 08:51 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Lizzie - 07-11-2016, 08:44 AM
RE: Revision Process - by next - 07-11-2016, 07:03 AM
RE: Revision Process - by billy - 07-11-2016, 10:28 AM
RE: Revision Process - by QDeathstar - 07-11-2016, 12:41 PM
RE: Revision Process - by Quixilated - 07-12-2016, 10:40 AM
RE: Revision Process - by Leanne - 07-13-2016, 05:02 AM



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