07-08-2016, 09:30 AM
Certainly they can be revised to death, I could point you to some of mine but I fear I'd scare you to edit death. Ah, the bloody axe.
But you can always go back and start again, using all that great crit to a better end.
Hey, I just thought of the first piece I posted here, after trying to implement all the great advice I went back to the original with just a few tweaks, but those tweaks did improve the poem. Writing poems can be torturous, if it's not fun too what's the point?
But you can always go back and start again, using all that great crit to a better end.
Hey, I just thought of the first piece I posted here, after trying to implement all the great advice I went back to the original with just a few tweaks, but those tweaks did improve the poem. Writing poems can be torturous, if it's not fun too what's the point?
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