06-29-2016, 11:11 AM
Thanks REW,
I do appreciate you taking the time to write a critique . I was thinking of thinking of dumping the 1st line, second stanza....it was originally an afterthought , so I think now I'll cut it. (-:
I do appreciate you taking the time to write a critique . I was thinking of thinking of dumping the 1st line, second stanza....it was originally an afterthought , so I think now I'll cut it. (-:
"Why do you suppose we only feel compelled to chase the ones who run away?" -Vicomte de Valmont, Dangerous Liasons