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Shadows of the Cosmos
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05-23-2016, 12:01 PM
Thank you all for taking the time to crit. I was hoping this poem wouldn't fall on its face due to being overly vague. Sounds like I've gotten away with it, though perhaps not absolutely. I don't think I can put this one in a "the poem means this" box - it's more a combination of themes. Very happy to hear it's working. I was a bit dejected earlier. Thanks again for the comments. Cheers,
- Matt 
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Shadows of the Cosmos - by Mattp - 05-17-2016, 09:31 AM
RE: Shadows of the Cosmos - by Caleb Murdock - 05-18-2016, 01:28 PM
RE: Shadows of the Cosmos - by Unknown - 05-21-2016, 01:24 PM
RE: Shadows of the Cosmos - by LunaDeLore - 05-23-2016, 12:18 AM
RE: Shadows of the Cosmos - by Quixilated - 05-23-2016, 07:23 AM
RE: Shadows of the Cosmos - by jayjayaustralia - 05-23-2016, 09:03 AM
RE: Shadows of the Cosmos - by Mattp - 05-23-2016, 12:01 PM
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