10-14-2015, 06:41 PM
The lack of punctuation makes this tough to interpret.
I enjoy the many ideas this poem produces, but it seems like abstracts on top of abstracts. I know this is in misc. and you're probably not looking for crit but I see potential here for something dope.
I enjoy the many ideas this poem produces, but it seems like abstracts on top of abstracts. I know this is in misc. and you're probably not looking for crit but I see potential here for something dope.