10-08-2015, 09:38 PM
(10-08-2015, 09:33 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:Ain't that the truth, worst that can happen is you don't get away with it and edit, the sky does not fall. And every now and then it works.(10-07-2015, 08:41 PM)Weeded Wrote: Ahh ok yeah it felt risky going with the double idea per line, thought I might be able to get away with it
Thanks for the feedback, I'll work on it some more.
Thinking that you might be able to get away with it is the very soul of poetry.
Keep heading in that direction.
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