Move Wisely

Move Wisely

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10-08-2015, 09:33 PM

(10-07-2015, 08:41 PM)Weeded Wrote: Ahh ok yeah it felt risky going with the double idea per line, thought I might be able to get away with it
Thanks for the feedback, I'll work on it some more.

Thinking that you might be able to get away with it is the very soul of poetry.
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Move Wisely - by Weeded - 10-07-2015, 06:48 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by rayheinrich - 10-07-2015, 07:40 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by Weeded - 10-07-2015, 07:49 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by rayheinrich - 10-07-2015, 08:30 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by Weeded - 10-07-2015, 08:41 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by rayheinrich - 10-08-2015, 09:33 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by ellajam - 10-08-2015, 09:38 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by rayheinrich - 10-08-2015, 10:14 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by ellajam - 10-08-2015, 10:18 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by RiverNotch - 10-09-2015, 08:09 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by Weeded - 10-09-2015, 08:15 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by RiverNotch - 10-09-2015, 08:22 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by rayheinrich - 10-10-2015, 11:58 AM

RE: Move Wisely - by Weeded - 10-10-2015, 01:27 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by RiverNotch - 10-10-2015, 01:34 PM

RE: Move Wisely - by rayheinrich - 10-10-2015, 04:08 PM

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