10-07-2015, 07:40 PM
(10-07-2015, 06:48 PM)Weeded Wrote: Here goes another attempt at a haiku, let me know if I messed up
Chicken wings? Plant feet?
Coward act? Gory glory?
False bravado kills.
While the premise/conclusion content fulfills the main requirement for a haiku,
the narrative is too extended and the conclusion shouldn't be a literal pronouncement.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions