Velvet Curtains

[joesammsington]

Velvet curtains on a window I see
I want its sights revealed to me
But a hymen blocks my view
I resolve to break it in two

So with a gladiator’s swagger
I pierce it with my dagger

Please give the rules a read:
5. One Poem Per Day in either the: Novice Forum, Mild Critique Forum, Serious Critique Forum. (NOT ONE IN EACH per day)
Thanks, mod.