Orange to the rescue
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(07-10-2015, 09:53 PM)TheOnlyRedSmurf Wrote:  The poem is VERY oblique. it's about VR or vertical and general rescue. the twigs are bones, the wrappings clothes or bandages. the litter is the rescue frame that they lift/carry people with and the angels are the medics who put the patient back together. it's something I have some training in and the lines came to me of all places in the shower. not sure why and is at the 3rd line
Unfortunately you were not with me to explain that. Smile Maybe you can use your title to plant that in my head and lead me in the right direction, I had no idea.
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Orange to the rescue - by TheOnlyRedSmurf - 07-10-2015, 02:20 PM
RE: needs a title - by cidermaid - 07-10-2015, 05:58 PM
RE: needs a title - by tectak - 07-10-2015, 06:24 PM
RE: needs a title - by TheOnlyRedSmurf - 07-10-2015, 09:53 PM
RE: needs a title - by ellajam - 07-10-2015, 10:12 PM
RE: needs a title - by Mark A Becker - 07-10-2015, 10:53 PM
RE: Orange to the rescue - by Mark A Becker - 07-11-2015, 10:30 AM
RE: Orange to the rescue - by TheOnlyRedSmurf - 07-11-2015, 01:42 PM
RE: Orange to the rescue - by Mark A Becker - 07-11-2015, 11:37 PM
RE: Orange to the rescue - by billy - 07-11-2015, 03:06 PM



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