Aviary Awakening

Aviary Awakening

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07-08-2015, 03:10 AM

Alsayn
Good ideas, thanks! I think you're right about "threatening" vs "threatens". I think I'll be changing apex as well, since it seems out of place. Thanks for commenting!

I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.

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Aviary Awakening - by Merrikay - 06-18-2015, 03:04 AM

RE: Avairy Awakening - by milo - 06-18-2015, 11:24 AM

RE: Avairy Awakening - by billy - 06-18-2015, 06:29 PM

RE: Avairy Awakening - by Todd - 06-18-2015, 11:21 PM

RE: Avairy Awakening - by Merrikay - 06-19-2015, 12:56 AM

RE: Aviary Awakening - by milo - 06-19-2015, 06:18 AM

RE: Avairy Awakening - by Todd - 06-19-2015, 01:22 AM

RE: Avairy Awakening - by Merrikay - 06-19-2015, 01:30 AM

RE: Aviary Awakening - by Merrikay - 06-19-2015, 07:17 AM

RE: Aviary Awakening - by Merrikay - 06-25-2015, 02:46 AM

RE: Aviary Awakening - by Todd - 06-25-2015, 04:17 AM

RE: Aviary Awakening - by Merrikay - 06-25-2015, 07:49 AM

RE: Aviary Awakening - by just mercedes - 06-26-2015, 07:51 AM

RE: Aviary Awakening - by Mark A Becker - 06-26-2015, 08:15 AM

RE: Aviary Awakening - by Merrikay - 06-27-2015, 01:31 AM

RE: Aviary Awakening - by alsayn - 07-04-2015, 07:09 PM

RE: Aviary Awakening - by Merrikay - 07-08-2015, 03:10 AM

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