05-07-2015, 06:55 AM
Every morning
I order a double Americano and a fresh pastry,
and write about The Coffeeshop Girl.
I'm in love with The Coffeeshop Girl.
I know she feels the same. (clever contrast with lines 13&14 where she treats every costumer the same)
I say, 'good morning!'
She winks and asks, 'the usual?'
I smile and leave a tip.
I sit by the window behind a notebook and thick frames.
Another notebook with thick frames sits at the counter,
more thick frames with laptops sit at tables.
They say, "good morning!"
She winks and asks, "the usual?"
They smile and leave a tip.
They all order double Americanos,
eat fresh pastries,
and write about The Coffeeshop Girl.
I love this poem, I love how everyone is in love with the Coffeeshop Girl, but I would like to know why. What's so special about this woman that puts a spell on everyone? I of course understand why you don't address the reasons why everyone's in love with her cause that's not your main focus. This poem just awakens my curiosity and maybe that's why I liked it so much ^_^
I order a double Americano and a fresh pastry,
and write about The Coffeeshop Girl.
I'm in love with The Coffeeshop Girl.
I know she feels the same. (clever contrast with lines 13&14 where she treats every costumer the same)
I say, 'good morning!'
She winks and asks, 'the usual?'
I smile and leave a tip.
I sit by the window behind a notebook and thick frames.
Another notebook with thick frames sits at the counter,
more thick frames with laptops sit at tables.
They say, "good morning!"
She winks and asks, "the usual?"
They smile and leave a tip.
They all order double Americanos,
eat fresh pastries,
and write about The Coffeeshop Girl.
I love this poem, I love how everyone is in love with the Coffeeshop Girl, but I would like to know why. What's so special about this woman that puts a spell on everyone? I of course understand why you don't address the reasons why everyone's in love with her cause that's not your main focus. This poem just awakens my curiosity and maybe that's why I liked it so much ^_^