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***/To My Children/
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10-13-2014, 05:34 AM
I think it should be "On some unnamed night and all will be bright". Then "The door will never close, the flowers will keep fragrant" Also maybe, "My children have fallen asleep most deeply" and "somebody will sing to them a cradle song"
But I love the concept of your poem. Good Luck! |
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***/To My Children/ - by bogpan - 10-12-2014, 02:42 PM
RE: ***/To My Children/ - by ellajam - 10-12-2014, 09:38 PM
RE: ***/To My Children/ - by bogpan - 10-13-2014, 11:53 PM
RE: ***/To My Children/ - by gypsyrose - 10-13-2014, 05:34 AM
RE: ***/To My Children/ - by bogpan - 10-14-2014, 12:00 AM
RE: ***/To My Children/ - by billy - 10-14-2014, 12:22 AM
RE: ***/To My Children/ - by bogpan - 10-14-2014, 12:18 PM
RE: ***/To My Children/ - by oceanwanderer20 - 10-15-2014, 08:48 AM
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