10-10-2014, 08:35 AM
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My friend always said eyes are so important
that soft eyes will make you feel warm and safe
but solid eyes will engulf you in the heat of love.
Your eyes were immensely blue and safe
I was convinced that your heart was on fire for mine
then I realized your heart was solid
just like your deceiving eyes
Lol so I just registered on this site because I like writing and I don't really want to like tell anyone that I know or show them my writing but I do want feedback on it to know if its good or not or if if makes anyone feel anything.. so yeah i just kinda want feedback
My friend always said eyes are so important
that soft eyes will make you feel warm and safe
but solid eyes will engulf you in the heat of love.
Your eyes were immensely blue and safe
I was convinced that your heart was on fire for mine
then I realized your heart was solid
just like your deceiving eyes
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Eyes
my friend always told me that eyes are so important
that soft eyes make you feel warm and safe but
the solid eyes will engulf you in the heat of love and
your eyes were so blue and so safe that
I was convinced that your heart was on fire for mine but
then I realized that your heart was cold and solid
just like your deceiving eyes
Lol so I just registered on this site because I like writing and I don't really want to like tell anyone that I know or show them my writing but I do want feedback on it to know if its good or not or if if makes anyone feel anything.. so yeah i just kinda want feedback
Babe you're on fire