10-04-2014, 11:12 AM
Hi, Moe, welcome, and thanks for leaving a critique for someone else before posting.
You've gotten a good critique from dale. My suggestion for you is to go to our reference boards where you'll find a fine collection of poems and readings. Poke around till you find a poet you like and read more.
If you read in our workshops you'll find a wealth of info in the critiques and if you'd like to learn some forms you'll find them in Poetry Practice Exercises.
Hope you have fun here.
You've gotten a good critique from dale. My suggestion for you is to go to our reference boards where you'll find a fine collection of poems and readings. Poke around till you find a poet you like and read more.
If you read in our workshops you'll find a wealth of info in the critiques and if you'd like to learn some forms you'll find them in Poetry Practice Exercises.
Hope you have fun here.

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