09-24-2014, 08:56 AM
Thank you. It wouldn't read right without a comma or period.
The shore beckons,
waves hurl their shells
empty, they leave impermanent prints
before being wiped by the pull
and the push of rising waters.
The shore beckons,
waves hurl their shells
empty, they leave impermanent prints
before being wiped by the pull
and the push of rising waters.

