ephemeral

[billy]

it reads a lot better. is a lot easier on the eye

The shore beckons,
waves hurl their shells
empty. They leave impermanent prints is the period and capped T needed?
before being wiped by the pull
and the push of rising waters. i like the last two lines a lot they create a solid image

i hope this reads okay. i used minimal punctuation to make it better (i suppose)