An Effort Unnoticed

An Effort Unnoticed

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09-03-2014, 06:01 AM

First off heart is misspelled in the first line. Secondly the end of the first stanza where it says "just to a fluster" I am very confused by this line and am not sure at all what you ment by it perhaps because to a makes it seem like cluster is a place.

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An Effort Unnoticed - by PHTj - 08-31-2014, 02:52 AM

RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by danny_ - 08-31-2014, 04:59 AM

RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by tectak - 08-31-2014, 06:01 AM

RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by billy - 08-31-2014, 06:09 PM

RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by PHTj - 09-02-2014, 01:25 AM

RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by tectak - 09-02-2014, 06:12 AM

RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by dwestmor - 09-03-2014, 06:01 AM

RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by vrryan - 09-30-2014, 08:37 PM

RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by billy - 09-30-2014, 10:11 PM

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