An Effort Unnoticed
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This is a dark poem from when I was in a dark time.
This is my second go at this one. Hope this is a better start than my last one. Thanks again for the help.

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AN EFFORT UNNOTICED

I though we were meant for each other.
I loved you so much.
All I wanted was for it to be returned.
I put forth ever effort possible.
But you ignored it all.

I worked harder and harder.
And you still brushed it aside.
You asked for all that I had and I gave and gave.
But you threw it all away.
All that I had is good intentions.
You said it doesn't matter.

No matter how hard I worked.
You really did not care.
Then you picked a fight.
Only for both of us to get hurt.
We both did wrong.

Our feelings were all mixed up.
So depression sets in.
I tried to stay happy.
I force the smiles and laughter,
but that's all gone now.

Deeper into sadness I went.
I held on for as long as I could.
I began to lose interest in everything.
My hopes and dreams began to fad from my thoughts.
I did not feel the burning desire of love and passion any more.
All that I once was is gone now.

I am dead inside.
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Messages In This Thread
An Effort Unnoticed - by PHTj - 08-31-2014, 02:52 AM
RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by danny_ - 08-31-2014, 04:59 AM
RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by tectak - 08-31-2014, 06:01 AM
RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by billy - 08-31-2014, 06:09 PM
RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by PHTj - 09-02-2014, 01:25 AM
RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by tectak - 09-02-2014, 06:12 AM
RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by dwestmor - 09-03-2014, 06:01 AM
RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by vrryan - 09-30-2014, 08:37 PM
RE: An Effort Unnoticed - by billy - 09-30-2014, 10:11 PM



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