08-31-2014, 02:52 AM
This is a dark poem from when I was in a dark time.
This is my second go at this one. Hope this is a better start than my last one. Thanks again for the help.
Edit One:
AN EFFORT UNNOTICED
I though we were meant for each other.
I loved you so much.
All I wanted was for it to be returned.
I put forth ever effort possible.
But you ignored it all.
I worked harder and harder.
And you still brushed it aside.
You asked for all that I had and I gave and gave.
But you threw it all away.
All that I had is good intentions.
You said it doesn't matter.
No matter how hard I worked.
You really did not care.
Then you picked a fight.
Only for both of us to get hurt.
We both did wrong.
Our feelings were all mixed up.
So depression sets in.
I tried to stay happy.
I force the smiles and laughter,
but that's all gone now.
Deeper into sadness I went.
I held on for as long as I could.
I began to lose interest in everything.
My hopes and dreams began to fad from my thoughts.
I did not feel the burning desire of love and passion any more.
All that I once was is gone now.
I am dead inside.
This is my second go at this one. Hope this is a better start than my last one. Thanks again for the help.
Edit One:
AN EFFORT UNNOTICED
I though we were meant for each other.
I loved you so much.
All I wanted was for it to be returned.
I put forth ever effort possible.
But you ignored it all.
I worked harder and harder.
And you still brushed it aside.
You asked for all that I had and I gave and gave.
But you threw it all away.
All that I had is good intentions.
You said it doesn't matter.
No matter how hard I worked.
You really did not care.
Then you picked a fight.
Only for both of us to get hurt.
We both did wrong.
Our feelings were all mixed up.
So depression sets in.
I tried to stay happy.
I force the smiles and laughter,
but that's all gone now.
Deeper into sadness I went.
I held on for as long as I could.
I began to lose interest in everything.
My hopes and dreams began to fad from my thoughts.
I did not feel the burning desire of love and passion any more.
All that I once was is gone now.
I am dead inside.