08-30-2014, 05:37 AM
(08-30-2014, 05:22 AM)Qdeathstar Wrote: Since everyone said something about I reckon I'll just go ahead and admit that the last line came from a different poem that fell apart, but I just felt that line was just too good to burn. :-|Ha, I do that too, it rarely works. It's a fine line, though. Keep trying.
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips