07-12-2014, 04:24 AM
I'm still looking for the transition between summer and frost, unless it is talking about the relationship going from warm to frosty. Hot passion before and now awaking there is a chill in the air. If so, I don't see why would insert "Mediterranean summer " a it just seems to confuse the issue. Same to as sun set in "inside an outstretched palm ---"
and how that leads to
"your face
in midnight."
There are some nice images here, but I took little meaning away from it. I suppose this could be an imagist poem, but I never took much away from them either.
Dale
and how that leads to
"your face
in midnight."
There are some nice images here, but I took little meaning away from it. I suppose this could be an imagist poem, but I never took much away from them either.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.