Indent

[billy]

hi expiring

we have a code that can be used to indent on the info pages
i agree that you don't need any fancy layoutin general your words work on their own. for instance, the first 4 lines look like you want the reader to pause intentionally but i can't work out why. the latter part f the poem is the best part, it has a good change of direction and is original

My knotted
stomach
heads
from under
Mediterranean summer
frost covers again for me the poem begins here as the previous lines are a struggle to make sense of
the edges of a window pane.
So good the ceilings not sure why [so good] but like the ceilings wink at me i see a flickering light
wink at me
(i n) wonder
I am
conscious
of my feet
    how close
        are they
to yours, and if yours
                                point
                in my direction.

Time to close this frolicking, find the prepositions
and scatter them against
this interesting
sunset,
sun
set
inside an outstretched palm ---
your face
in midnight.



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I was experimenting with different indents but wasn't sure how to format it properly:
https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1zMPA...wiCgw/edit