Plasticine
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Thanks again, Todd and QDS. Based on your comments this is my first rewrite. Still playing with it.

I remember a limousine,
and a girl singing
just flat enough to notice
a shyness not quite abandoned
behind darkened windows and drinks included.

I remember Plasticine,
a chorus of perfumes smudging,
and me kneading the chaos
into a form I could take with me,
through darkened windows and drinks included.

I remember a stolen dream,
and a sunrise outside a limousine
that slid in without remark;
a thief emboldened
by darkened windows and drinks included.
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Plasticine - by Tiger the Lion - 05-26-2014, 10:15 AM
RE: Plasticine - by QDeathstar - 05-26-2014, 10:46 AM
RE: Plasticine - by Tiger the Lion - 05-26-2014, 11:01 AM
RE: Plasticine - by Todd - 05-26-2014, 11:33 AM
RE: Plasticine - by Tiger the Lion - 05-26-2014, 11:46 AM
RE: Plasticine - by Tiger the Lion - 06-02-2014, 05:14 AM
RE: Plasticine - by ellajam - 06-04-2014, 06:08 AM
RE: Plasticine - by RSaba - 06-04-2014, 05:39 AM
RE: Plasticine - by zmeansy - 06-04-2014, 06:42 AM
RE: Plasticine - by Tiger the Lion - 06-08-2014, 10:05 AM



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