05-27-2014, 01:13 PM
Hello, welcome to the site. I found the title initially confusing, then I saw it was redundant. You might want to look at reducing the redundancies of "I was never", and "I was always". I'm not sure if this is about the writer, but maybe it is too close (that's how it seems) to do anything other than hint. Maybe the writer should try something that is not so personal, or difficult to write about.
Best,
Dale
Best,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.