05-25-2014, 12:34 PM
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The line between the legs which yearns, burns, and begs,
searches for a soul to devour with unshakeable power.
The want beyond one wife yields pain, strain, and strife,
twists my thoughts; shivering, hurried, and hot.
The shallow within ourselves which extolls, cajoles, and contains,
ignores empathy; trading faith for apathy resigned.
An alternate last line:
Ignores empathy; replaces faith with apathy resigned.
The line between the legs which yearns, burns, and begs,
searches for a soul to devour with unshakeable power.
The want beyond one wife yields pain, strain, and strife,
twists my thoughts; shivering, hurried, and hot.
The shallow within ourselves which extolls, cajoles, and contains,
ignores empathy; trading faith for apathy resigned.
An alternate last line:
Ignores empathy; replaces faith with apathy resigned.