05-25-2014, 02:02 AM
Thank you tectak, I think I can use some of your suggestions to improve the poem.
Two people have brought this up that they think the third line is about the wife's want. But it's not, it's about how having a wife is not enough to satisfy the speaker. It is obviously unclear.
Two people have brought this up that they think the third line is about the wife's want. But it's not, it's about how having a wife is not enough to satisfy the speaker. It is obviously unclear.