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JMSelden
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05-24-2014, 01:54 PM

The way I read this is very disturbing. Will most likely edit on further comment after a reread.

Hi, JM. We are here to help each other improve our writing. Please think about whether or not your comment helps the poet in any way. it may be best to do your rereading before posting. Thanks, and welcome. ella/mod.

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