02-13-2014, 03:55 AM
Surrender
You dont have my back
so much for friends
You forgot how to live
You've been dead since you did
surrender
I know youre blind
but I'm not deaf
Hitting the right notes
is the first fucking step
Surrender
I give up no
surrender
I give up no
surrender I give up
Your friendship was plain
You make me sick
Compare me to him?
Grow up its pathetic
You think you're tough?
We were supposed to be brothers
Have respect for my choices
Have fun playing covers
you surrendered
to the drugs that make you sick
you surrendered
you think it makes you different
This is meant to be lyrics to a song. Stop me if that's not the intent of a poetry forum, I just wanted to put it in context. I also put surrender in bold to make it more musical. It's sung in my head like Kieth Morris of Black Flag / OFF.
Thanks!
You dont have my back
so much for friends
You forgot how to live
You've been dead since you did
surrender
I know youre blind
but I'm not deaf
Hitting the right notes
is the first fucking step
Surrender
I give up no
surrender
I give up no
surrender I give up
Your friendship was plain
You make me sick
Compare me to him?
Grow up its pathetic
You think you're tough?
We were supposed to be brothers
Have respect for my choices
Have fun playing covers
you surrendered
to the drugs that make you sick
you surrendered
you think it makes you different
This is meant to be lyrics to a song. Stop me if that's not the intent of a poetry forum, I just wanted to put it in context. I also put surrender in bold to make it more musical. It's sung in my head like Kieth Morris of Black Flag / OFF.
Thanks!