02-06-2014, 01:30 AM
What struck me the most was that there were few if any poetic devices used. including no cadence. Using a song to help you write might help you with something to write,, but its probably not going to teach you how to write poetry, unless of course the lyrics are also poems.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

