01-23-2014, 07:55 PM
I don't think the center justify makes much sense here. There are a number of grammatical and tense errors as well as forced rhymes. The tone is condescending, it is easy to take pot shots at humans. This is really no different than the victim imagining him/herself when on day they will have the power to crush and make pay all their prosecutors. So this simply ends up as a rant,rather than anything showing insight.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.