[The Futility of Lamentation]
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Hi Smile

I am new on this site. The poem has a very good core and message. Perhaps, fewer words and combined lines might be useful.
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[The Futility of Lamentation] - by HalfOpenArms - 12-11-2013, 01:21 PM
RE: [The Futility of Lamentation] - by ellajam - 12-11-2013, 02:30 PM
RE: [The Futility of Lamentation] - by tigrflye - 12-11-2013, 06:23 PM
RE: [The Futility of Lamentation] - by beaufort - 12-12-2013, 12:38 AM
RE: [The Futility of Lamentation] - by crow - 12-28-2013, 03:33 PM
RE: [The Futility of Lamentation] - by Farkas - 12-29-2013, 02:24 AM
RE: [The Futility of Lamentation] - by Hocus_Fapus - 01-26-2014, 08:21 AM
RE: [The Futility of Lamentation] - by tomoffing - 01-28-2014, 05:10 PM
RE: [The Futility of Lamentation] - by MissingBob - 01-30-2014, 08:07 AM



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