Mirrory
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Yes, bena, it should be breastless. The original impulse for this poem was a line from Sylvia Plath wherein she asks 'Has it breasts? Has it edges?'. The strangeness and delight of these questions was the original impulse of the poem. Thus I am willing to change a lot of things, but this image is rather important, even if I cannot explain what exactly I mean by it. I will let you know when I have a new draft.
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Mirrory - by lucentwavering - 11-14-2013, 05:38 PM
RE: Mirrory - by ChristopherSea - 11-14-2013, 08:02 PM
RE: Mirrory - by lucentwavering - 11-15-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: Mirrory - by ChristopherSea - 11-15-2013, 09:10 AM
RE: Mirrory - by lucentwavering - 11-16-2013, 06:32 AM
RE: Mirrory - by bena - 11-16-2013, 11:32 AM
RE: Mirrory - by lucentwavering - 11-16-2013, 07:12 PM



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