Mirrory

[bena]

It is breastless in the original....which made me laugh, because this time it wasn't just my dirty mind. The after is confusing to me...after you drop the coat? Ok you just posted something while I'm typing, is it *supposed* to be breastless? If so, I'm even more confused than before. I don't like window joke....I'm not sure what it's supposed to mean. Trust me, I like the idea of this---If someone ignores the clouds between them and someone, they can see the rainbow. But to me it needs more clarity. If your audience doesn't get what you are saying, you've lost a reader.

Keep re-writing, this is a gem in the making.

mel/bena