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Mirrory
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11-14-2013, 08:02 PM
Good Morning lucent. I think you could develop this more. Who/what is behind this voice? For whom is the advice? Mirrory (reflecting) seems to conflict with clouds (nearly opague) and prism (refracting). Could you link them better? What is the purpose of the hyphens? breastless and edgeless what? Where are the nouns? What is imprisoned? Some things you need to think about. Cheers/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Mirrory - by lucentwavering - 11-14-2013, 05:38 PM
RE: Mirrory - by ChristopherSea - 11-14-2013, 08:02 PM
RE: Mirrory - by lucentwavering - 11-15-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: Mirrory - by ChristopherSea - 11-15-2013, 09:10 AM
RE: Mirrory - by lucentwavering - 11-16-2013, 06:32 AM
RE: Mirrory - by bena - 11-16-2013, 11:32 AM
RE: Mirrory - by lucentwavering - 11-16-2013, 07:12 PM
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