11-13-2013, 07:37 PM
I missed the when to how change on my read, but good catch. You were right to make the change.
I don't think you're thinking about it too much. These are usually the way revisions go. You finish, wait for a bit, then see something else ("oh crap! how did I miss that comma). You're in the final leg though, and the poem has developed well.
I don't think you're thinking about it too much. These are usually the way revisions go. You finish, wait for a bit, then see something else ("oh crap! how did I miss that comma). You're in the final leg though, and the poem has developed well.