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Vacancy
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11-08-2013, 05:24 PM
I started sympathising with the poem here, right up until I realised he/she has a king size bed. Things aren't that bad
 It's a nice poem: sweet, simple, and to the point. Not much I can add in terms of actual workshopping
If I could say only one thing before I die, it'd probably be,
"Please don't kill me" |
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RE: Morning - by Graystar - 11-06-2013, 02:52 PM
RE: Morning - by Wjames - 11-07-2013, 02:50 AM
RE: Morning - by lainey - 11-06-2013, 03:06 PM
RE: Vacancy - by ThePinsir - 11-07-2013, 04:19 AM
RE: Vacancy - by Wjames - 11-08-2013, 01:15 PM
RE: Vacancy - by Nick - 11-07-2013, 05:57 AM
RE: Vacancy - by justcloudy - 11-07-2013, 06:30 AM
RE: Vacancy - by Keith - 11-07-2013, 07:16 AM
RE: Vacancy - by hollyw - 11-08-2013, 02:16 PM
RE: Vacancy - by SirBrendan - 11-08-2013, 05:24 PM
RE: Vacancy - by violetdarling - 11-09-2013, 11:48 PM
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