11-06-2013, 03:06 PM
(11-06-2013, 01:29 PM)Wjames Wrote: In the end, I awake alone.Is morning a pun on mourning? Don't answer. I will take it as such because for me it gives a richer reading if it is
The emptiness of my king-sized bed
magnified by the unbridled moans
crashing out of the apartment next door.
. 'In the end' is ambiguous, end of life? a story? Though it's intriguing that you put it at the beginning.

