Vacancy
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(11-06-2013, 01:29 PM)Wjames Wrote:  In the end, I awake alone.
The emptiness of my king-sized bed
magnified by the unbridled moans
crashing out of the apartment next door.
Is morning a pun on mourning? Don't answer. I will take it as such because for me it gives a richer reading if it is Smile. 'In the end' is ambiguous, end of life? a story? Though it's intriguing that you put it at the beginning.
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Vacancy - by Wjames - 11-06-2013, 01:29 PM
RE: Morning - by Graystar - 11-06-2013, 02:52 PM
RE: Morning - by Wjames - 11-07-2013, 02:50 AM
RE: Morning - by lainey - 11-06-2013, 03:06 PM
RE: Vacancy - by ThePinsir - 11-07-2013, 04:19 AM
RE: Vacancy - by Wjames - 11-08-2013, 01:15 PM
RE: Vacancy - by Nick - 11-07-2013, 05:57 AM
RE: Vacancy - by justcloudy - 11-07-2013, 06:30 AM
RE: Vacancy - by Keith - 11-07-2013, 07:16 AM
RE: Vacancy - by hollyw - 11-08-2013, 02:16 PM
RE: Vacancy - by SirBrendan - 11-08-2013, 05:24 PM
RE: Vacancy - by violetdarling - 11-09-2013, 11:48 PM



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