10-23-2013, 11:19 PM
Chris, after catching your response to Jenn, it seemed to me like I was taking you too literally. But I'm glad you got something from it anyways before I gave it the axe! As far as the waxen thing goes, I'm not sure. I'd say yes, only because it adds a dimension of complexity, and whatever sense you think "waxen" gives too easily away, there is another, perhaps deeper one that a different reading might betray.

