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billy Offline
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#21
10-29-2013, 12:39 PM
good workshopping tygr :J:
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#22
10-29-2013, 12:41 PM
(10-29-2013, 12:39 PM)billy Wrote:  good workshopping tygr :J:

Thanks to you guys!
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Todd Offline
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#23
10-29-2013, 12:46 PM
Leading is subtle, but it really makes the line work.

I'm really enjoying what you've done Jenn.

Good job holding to your original vision and making strong edits.
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