Was it?
#1
Was it? (Edited)

Screech, skid, bang, crash, thump
Crumpled metal and shattered dreams
Screams of pain counter a voice forever silenced
Shards of glass scattered in scarlet pools

Whisps of smoke
fleeing skyward
trying in vain
to outrace the pain
of one now absent

Casts on arms and legs
Yet what can heal
a broken heart
Replace so bright a soul?

Falling tears, heartbreaking wails
thud of earth on casket
your last embrace (maybe this is better?)
not of loved ones
but
of
cold
dark
earth

And all because,
of temper unchecked
A desire to win!
Was it worth it...
Was it worth it?
Was it?
Reply


Messages In This Thread
Was it? - by Mogra - 10-08-2013, 02:05 AM
RE: Was it? - by Malu - 10-08-2013, 03:43 AM
RE: Was it? - by Mogra - 10-08-2013, 04:28 AM
RE: Was it? - by Malu - 10-08-2013, 04:53 AM
RE: Was it? - by ellajam - 10-08-2013, 10:24 PM
RE: Was it? - by Glittercake - 10-08-2013, 11:30 PM
RE: Was it? - by Mogra - 10-09-2013, 01:27 AM
RE: Was it? - by ellajam - 10-09-2013, 06:12 AM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!